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Maryam's avatar

When I saw my name I had to read immediately! In all seriousness, this was beautiful as always.

tanya's avatar

thank you so much 🤍🥺

ℬℯ𝓇𝓃𝒶's avatar

honestly, i don't even know what to say... the way u found such a beautiful story and brought it to life is so incredible. i feel like there's so much i could learn from u. the thought that stayed with me after reading was that people who don't quite belong anywhere will always look for a little corner to call their own. i truly admire your writing. you're such a beautiful writer 🪽

tanya's avatar

awww Berna! Thank you for your sweet comment, made my day🥹🥹🥹

Aadya Manan's avatar

This feels like a beautifully constructed allegory for belonging, ambition, and the danger of mistaking escape for freedom. I also loved the idea that hunger changes once you’ve known what it feels like to be fed, because it makes his desire to escape feel both understandable and ultimately consuming.

tanya's avatar

thank you so much for reading aadya🥹🤍